Thursday, 17 March 2011

Double page spread


Front page- nice ideas and codes and conventions but a bit of blank/extra space in the top right hand corner.
Contents, i think the font is a bit too large and the text over the image isn't overly clear. There is a lack of text in general so it looks like you have just expanded what you text you do have to fill space. the colour schemes are working well and the images are effective. page numbers done?

Monday, 7 March 2011

Dolby

I like the raw simplicity; the font and image work well for genre- now integrate text and image effectively- check codes and conventions.

Front Cover